redone my site

could you pease review again and tell me thumbs up or thumbs down i also have a shop added on too i will post links. i also have a new forum


http://cannockcarbreakers.co.uk/trolly for shop

http://cannockcarbreakers.co.uk/forum for forum

thanks for the reviews before
Gav@cannockcarbreakers.co.uk

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Hi,

I think that's really getting there - much better. A couple of points.

1) The shop link to should be in the main menu of the "mothersite - http://cannockcarbreakers.co.uk/". I know you have the link in the pages there, but having it in the menu will make it much easier for everyone to find it.

2) On the shop pages, i think you need a link to the mothersite in the menu at the top eg "Back to Cannock Car Breakers main site"

3) Forums. If you can re-skin them a little to reflect the consistent greys of the main and shop sites they'll feel more like "yours".

4) Forums again. Do you need all those image based and non-linking ads at the top of the page? They're a bit hectic and confusing! Replace with text ads maybe - they'll work just as well.

5) Forums again. Get the links in to the shop and main site somewhere. If it all fits together the elements will work to cross-promote each other and you'll do better out of it.

6) Mothersite homepage. The page is very wide. Maybe knock that third ad down beneath the other two to get in the promo items on the right at a sensible screen size? (Or simply make the images half the size)

Hope that helps!

Simon

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I think some more colors could be added and some pictures are missing that are to be filled. I just view the front page of the site as i have just a bit time to look at.But i will complete the review later as i got to go.

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thanks for the reviws i am on it now i hav sorted some things out.
any ideas which page i ftp from zencart to edit main page as my friend done that part for me and he is away on holiday at the moment
thankyou for any help in advance


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Very nice. Tryed in the heading is spelled tried, but other than that looks great.

Pictures slightly bigger maybe?

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One thing I'd suggest is to use a more meaningful TITLE tag on your page. "Welcome hope you find this site helpful and easy to navigate" doesn't tell visitors anything about the topic of your site. The TITLE tag content is critical, as not only do search engines use it to determine your page's relevance, but the TITLE tag is also shown in the search results.

For example: "Cannock Car Breakers: Car breaking and spare parts service in Saredon near Cannock" would work well.

Matt


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and when you're tweaking your title have a go at your keywords too, and remember to mis spell the main words so folks that make mistakes still find you, Like Cannock, Canock, cannok etc

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http://www.riverannan.co.uk/