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01-May-07 14:16

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riyada

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From: Mendoza, Mendoza, Argentina

Hi all..
Anyone like to comment on my site.?
Thanks
www.ranabtawi.com

04-May-07 11:01

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simon

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Hi,

I can see where you're going with this one, and I love the dropped capitals at the start of the paragraphs.

I do think that you could maybe lose a few homepage elements, since it's a very long page - maybe add that map to a separate "location" page?

Also, the column widths on the homepage vary quite dramatically. I'd consider making them all the same width, or making some of the "things to do" elements a right-hand column.

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08-Oct-09 20:23

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kenjpet

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I can tell you put an incredible amount of work into your site. I enjoyed the graphics on top and the welcome text is very good. I think for a landing page you should have stopped there. The rest of the page is painfully long and should be redistributed to the other pages. It looks like you have a very beautiful resort there and I wish you the best of luck with business.

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15-Oct-09 16:27

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chrishirst

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From: Blackpool, Lancashire, England

Another necroposted "review"

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15-Oct-09 22:59

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matt

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From: Southern Highlands, NSW, Australia

Again, I'm not sure Ken realised how old the topic was! But his comments are still helpful and relevant.

I agree that the page is far too long. It would help to break the content up into separate pages, from both a usability and an SEO perspective.

Cheers,
Matt

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