Dude,
It looks like a simple web site for those who are ready to pay too little money for web design. I'd say yopur sites are two representatives of the most classic web pages. But now the world demands new technologies, and new look onto web design. I do not wanna be too strict in judging but I would say that I do not like colours and fonts - that's the way porno sites look like. If you are a beginner I'd say your site is good, otherwise it's simple and primitive. Perhaps, it is more informative that intertaining. In short, as we say in Russia, it is good for the outskirts. Sorry!!!
Gosh! You are 18 years old!!! It explains everything!!! Way to go!!! Future is near and you'll bring more interesting web pages if you would like to. Just visit my web site, it is bloody and cool (for me, i think)
www.abond.org 
