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21-Jun-05 00:08
Hi, my site is www.gilscoastalcharters.com
Please give me some feedback. Also it is not showing up in search engines. Suggestions please

Thanks
21-Jun-05 18:16
see reply in authoring forum


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Chris.
So long, and thanks for all the fish.
http://webmaster-talk.eu/
28-Jun-05 18:49
I only drop in now and again. Please take this as constructive advice!

There is far too little information spread over far too many pages and what there is is presented in a rather scrappy and uncordinated way. I know it's difficult to come up with copy when you face a blank screen try writing out your ideas on paper then editing them down. Sell! You must excite visitors. The picture of Gil on the homepage looks like a 'spirit-photo' and many of the other pics are duplicated and of poor quality. Find some stunning visuals for your site. Put more info on the main page (people do not mind scrolling down!) Dump: the links; the reservation page (get people to email you and then you can close the deal) ; the photo-gallery - unless you fill it with great fishing pics (otherwise embed them in the other pages) and the ANIMATED FISH!

Where's the boat? Where are the happy customers? Testimonials?

Check out lots of similiar sites via Google to see what they are doing. Steal their copy! (However, it seems most fishing sites have rather strange design ideas!) With more information and better design you will be on your way to higher rankings, without them nothing will get you better noticed. Sorry if this seems harsh but, as they say, you did ask. Best of luck and happy fishing!
21-Jul-05 03:28
Hi,

see my reply on autoring.

ta

Kai

 
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