OK, I'll bite. Take a look and let me have it.
www.LiveAbundantly.com
www.LiveAbundantly.com
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Hello Clyde, welcome to the Forums!
LiveAbundantly.com has a nice, welcoming feel to it, helped by the use of Comic Sans as a font for the body text. The white backgound and lots of padding between the page elements gives the site a spacious, relaxed feel. The logo is good and clear, though it could do with a bit of smoothing (antialiasing).
The wealth of information is easily accessible from the links on the front page, but some of the sub-pages (I think all the ones linked to from the left-hand links) didn't appear to have a "back to home page" link, which impeded navigation.
On the front page, consider lining up your top-right links with the yellow news box below to give a more professional touch.
One final point - when I first visited your site on my normal browser (Netscape 4.7/Linux) it completely crashed! I think this is due to JavaScript errors on your page (though Netscape is notoriously bad at crashing on Linux at the best of times!).
In summary - a good, clean site which retains its spacious feel even with the large amount of information it contains. Good work!
Best wishes,
Matt
Elated
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Matt Doyle, Elated
3rd Edition of my jQuery Mobile book out now! Learn to build mobile web apps. Free sample chapter: http://store.elated.com/
LiveAbundantly.com has a nice, welcoming feel to it, helped by the use of Comic Sans as a font for the body text. The white backgound and lots of padding between the page elements gives the site a spacious, relaxed feel. The logo is good and clear, though it could do with a bit of smoothing (antialiasing).
The wealth of information is easily accessible from the links on the front page, but some of the sub-pages (I think all the ones linked to from the left-hand links) didn't appear to have a "back to home page" link, which impeded navigation.
On the front page, consider lining up your top-right links with the yellow news box below to give a more professional touch.
One final point - when I first visited your site on my normal browser (Netscape 4.7/Linux) it completely crashed! I think this is due to JavaScript errors on your page (though Netscape is notoriously bad at crashing on Linux at the best of times!).
In summary - a good, clean site which retains its spacious feel even with the large amount of information it contains. Good work!
Best wishes,
Matt
Elated
--
Matt Doyle, Elated
3rd Edition of my jQuery Mobile book out now! Learn to build mobile web apps. Free sample chapter: http://store.elated.com/
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