
DISCLAIMER!
None of this is written in stone! It's just what I have
found works for me, and some may be useful for you too.
The only 'magic ingredient' is LUCK, but you know what
they say: 'The harder you work, the luckier you get!'
HOW
EROTIC WRITING COMPARES WITH
WRITING OTHER TYPES OF FICTION
Speaking personally, it's not all that
different. I always aim to write a 'proper' (as well as
an 'improper'!) novel, with some semblance of a plot, and
characters who are a bit more than just cardboard
figures. Although the requirement of this genre is for
around 50 per cent sex scenes I try to include other
material that might be of interest. I based 'Aphrodisia'
around the perfume industry, for instance, since scent
has always played a part in sexual arousal. In my Black
Lace historicals there's quite a bit of scope for
interesting snippets about past times, but ideally
everything should be related to the erotic theme.
WRITING
AS SEDUCTION
If you think about it, all writing contains a strong
element of seduction. First you must package your book to
attract the potential reader. Hopefully your publisher
will do this with an eye-catching jacket and some
whispered words of enticement (the blurb). Then the
reader might be tempted to flirt with you, the writer, by
flicking through your book in the store. They might make
a close inspection of the front view (first page) or the
back (the last page). If they like what they see your
book might be bought and taken away to somewhere more
private, where the real business of seduction begins.
Now that you have your reader 'hooked' your task is to
maintain their interest, so you must use a few tricks.
Act like a striptease artiste and don't reveal everything
at once! Tease and intrigue them, arousing curiosity and
excitement. But also give your readers time to settle in
and explore the new experience you are creating for them.
Arouse their senses as well as their mind. Now they're
really involved and wanting more, but be sure to pace
your book so as to maintain their interest while still
keeping something back. Do something unexpected from time
to time, or they'll get bored.
You've set the scene and plotted a course for the
characters that leads inevitably towards some sort of
climax. Now keep your reader hovering on the brink for a
while. Make them think it's going to happen now . . .
then disappoint them a little, only to raise their
expectations again. Wait until they're completely
absorbed and hanging on your every word before you
finally deliver that shattering climax (or even multiple
climaxes!) before letting them relax into the pleasant
afterglow of a happy ending, with all their curiosity
satisfied and expectations fulfilled. Hopefully the
experience will have been so satisfying that your readers
will come back for more!
HOW
TO WRITE A GOOD SEX SCENE
Don't imagine you can get away with just fantasising on
paper - editors and readers expect a lot more than that.
If you pour out a string of four-letter words, or stick
to stark descriptions of the action with no emphasis on
sensual detail or subtler shades of feeling, your work
will seem at best amateurish and at worse will seem like
the crude outpourings of an adolescent w..ker!
For classy erotic writing two words that come to mind are
'detail' and 'involvement,' both yours and the reader's.
You should describe what's happening in detail, and all
aspects should be lovingly dwelt upon or, if the scene is
brief, vividly conveyed. Try to avoid crude expression
and cliche, though it's not always possible. Use your
taste and judgement, attributes that every writer needs
and the erotic writer more than most. Aim to orchestrate
your sex scenes with highs and lows, obviously building
towards one or more climaxes, followed by some resolution
- although sometimes it is more fun to leave your readers
high and dry until the next chapter!
Involve the reader by describing physical feelings and
emotions, as well as actions. Participles (-ing verbs)
are useful to avoid the monotony of 'he did this then she
did that.' Aim to get some rhythmic flow into your
writing that carries the reader on smoothly from one
piece of the action to next.
Remember we have five senses and write to appeal to all
of them. Dialogue can be useful, but more in the build-up
to the sex scene than in the scene itself, where it
should be used sparingly. Make use of your knowledge of
the different ways people make love and imagine new ones,
new settings, to get as much variety as possible into
your writing. Remember, variety adds SPICE!
HOW
TO IMPROVE YOUR WRITING
All writers are also readers. Your job as a writer is to
put yourself in the position of a reader coming to your
book for the first time. It's not easy, but once you've
mastered the trick it will pay dividends. You'll find
yourself asking such questions as 'Do we really need to
know all this right now?' 'Why do three of the
characters' names begin with S?' and 'What was the point
of introducing that character, since they have nothing
whatever to do with the plot?' Then you'll know how to
edit your writing.
Read 'How To' books if you must, but develop your own way
of working. Every writer works differently. Some write
every day from 6 a.m. to noon, others work best in the
small hours. Some aim to write a thousand words a day,
others are pleased if they manage a hundred. Some polish
as they go along and can't start the next bit till
they're satisfied, others write the whole thing without
stopping then go back and tinker. Find the way that works
for you.
When I was first learning the craft of writing I read
loads of 'How To' books for the various genres I was
interested in. Be warned: they can become addictive! By
reading these books you can convince yourself that you're
learning magic tricks to improve your writing, but
there's no substitute for practice, practice, practice.
After a while the books began to seem repetitive and I
realised I was only getting one or two useful new points
from each one. I also realise the money could be better
spent on getting a really good dictionary, slang
dictionary, thesaurus, etc.
Read other erotic novels but, again, beware! They are not
all well-written. Choose only the best as your models.
Write the book that turns YOU on, describe the characters
and situations and techniques that YOU find erotic, and
trust that others will feel the same.
HOW
TO GET PUBLISHED
The most thriving market for erotic novels is the British
one. Black Lace pioneered erotica for women and this has
given a boost to the genre. However, four years on most
lines are pretty full and you face a good deal of
competition. The initial boom is probably levelling out
in the UK although US and worldwide sales may continue to
rise. Before you send anything out get the writers'
guidelines for each line and make sure your story fits,
as requirements differ between publishers - certainly as
regards word length, for instance.
PUBLISHERS' ADDRESSES:
The bad news is that the 'Erotica Boom' is now over in the UK. Most of
these publishers have now stopped publishing erotica or only consider their
exisiting authors. In the US, Masquerade have also cut back, and revised
their guidelines.
Black Lace is still open to new writers, but you are strongly advised to
send for their guidelines to this address,
enclosing postage or international reply coupon:
Kerri Sharp,
Editor, Black Lace Books,
Virgin Publishing,
Thames Wharf Studios,
Rainville Road,
London W6 9HT
UK
The usual rules about submitting work apply, i.e.
presentable, typed mss and send only synopsis plus up to
three sample chapters in the first instance. Make sure
you include a stamped, addressed envelope or
international reply coupons if you want acknowledgement.
And include a phone number, as some editors like to phone
and chat about your book if they're interested.
WRITING
'SHORT'
There is not much of a market for erotic short stories
these days since several UK magazines that used to
publish them have folded. Anthologies occasionally appear
- Black Lace is publishing one called 'Sugar and Spice'
sometime soon - and there is the American 'Herotica'
series. But your best bet if you want to give your
stories an airing is the Internet. Do first read the
rules for each site and follow them, as some may not
accept explicitly sexual material. You can post stories
to ERA (see Related Sites) or to other writers' groups such
as Compuserve's 'Erotic Literature' forum, which runs a
workshop. With luck you may even get some feedback on
your writing!
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